Tuesday, April 5, 2005

Summer Nights (2-3-05) Comments

Rating: 4.5

Summer nights,
the warm, thick air,
a little humid, but not
too much,
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Kayla Jarnac
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Peter A. Crowther 05 May 2005

I agree with Jodi but you need a full stop (period?) after 'in'

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Kayla Jarnac 13 April 2005

well...summer nites are my most favorite time ever...so relaxing...

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Jodi Right 05 April 2005

Thats lovely! i like the feel of it. Your a great descriptive poet and i can just feel the warm breeze pushing through my hair. Weather is a constant topic used in poetry and often appears dull but you have really expressed it in a way that the image is outstanding Love Jodixxx

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