Sun N Son Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Sun N Son

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Something has gone wrong with meaning of words,
'Sun' and 'Son' beautiful creation of lords,
Both represent energy having sharpness of swords,
Both are crucial for survival and existence of world,

Son is embodiment of energy and power,
Darkness disappears when sun rays appear,
All worship Sun god and offer prayer
Light may appear through clouds from layer

Son is source of great hope and despair,
Damage caused may be more and beyond repair,
Sun renders service which we can't compare,
Rising daily from east and non appearance rare,

Parent pray for sun to have light in home,
Worshiping many Gods and visiting Rome
Hoping lamp in huts to light and shine,
Praying for son to almighty and divine,

Sun may have power with scorching heat,
Son may also show some kind of daring feat,
Each may be scoring and beating record,
One may prove……………………..

Sun may hide face in dark night,
Parents may cry for son during day light,
Daily scuffles on with wordy fight,
Whom do we blame for want of light?

Many may be blessed with intelligent son,
They should always rejoice with simple reason
Greed may run high with aim only gain,
Parent should not keep that only aim

Many parents may not come out and openly speak,
Dryness and worry on face and future seems bleak,
Both are welcome in life and are so dear,
No parent may prefer bad words to hear

We can't afford for loss of any one
Fate may not be same as faced by everyone
The irony of fact remains almost same in nature
We should not blame anybody in near future

Is it an end of life or start of the game?
Do the children take on for simple fame?
Will situation remain for all times to come?
Will they not blame and refuse to welcome

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subbaraman N V 13 September 2009

Yes; 'the irony of fact remains the same'! A nice write up! Thanks for sharing!

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Seema Chowdhury 06 October 2009

very nice and touchy poem. thanks alot for sharing. it stir the emotions in the heart of the reader. pl see my new poems dwell in my soul- pg1 watch the mqagic happen- pg3

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Umesh Lalvani 06 October 2009

Son embodiment of energy and power, Darkness disappears and light shower

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Kashi Paul 06 October 2009

Source of great hope and despair, Damage more but only can repair, Selfless service and can’t compare,

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Kamli Kamal 07 October 2009

Son embodiment of energy and power, Darkness disappears and light shower, All worship and pray but disregard

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 September 2010

oth represent energy having sharpness of swords, Both are crucial for survival and existence of world,

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K.v. Subbarao 10 October 2009

Son embodiment of energy and power, Darkness disappears and light shower, All worship and pray but disregard fewer,

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Sulochna Pandit 09 October 2009

Something has gone wrong with the words, “Sun” and “Son” beautiful creation of lords, Both represent energy and sharpness of swords,

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Maulin Shah 07 October 2009

Parents pray for light in home, Worship many and visit Rome

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Shilpa Maheswari 07 October 2009

Son embodiment of energy and power, Darkness disappears and light shower, All worship and pray but disregard f

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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