Sun Of My Moon, Moon Of My Stars Poem by Astrid Elisabeth Kathleen Schmid

Sun Of My Moon, Moon Of My Stars

Rating: 5.0


You're the sun of my moon, the moon of my stars

The blood in my veins, the beat of my heart

The light of my eyes, the key to my soul

The sound of my voice, the thoughts in my head

The door to heaven, my light in darkness

The color in my life, the joy of my happiness

The music in my ears, the desert of my tears

The air in my lungs, the fire of my sun

The protection from my evil sins, the source of goodness in my heart

The relief of my pain, my shelter from troubled winds

The solution to my problems, the savior from my ego

You're all that I need and all that I hold


You are as pure as pure love can be

Wednesday, December 27, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: happiness,heart song,love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this because in one moment I felt all those things expressed in the poem for a person. It was so overwhelming that I had to write it down. It should be a gift.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kathy Van Kurin 07 March 2018

Sun Of My Moon, Moon Of My Stars Astrid Elisabeth kathleen Schmid, All encomapassing is the feeling within this theme of heavenly splendor. The moon and stars support and sing together in glory. Your heart being stirred recognizes the sweetness of love and the voice of creation within your own heart. Beautiful work. Blessings, Kathy

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Chinedu Dike 27 December 2017

The essence of true love is aptly captured in the poem. Lovely and very passionate piece elegantly brought forth from the heart with insight. Thanks for sharing Elizabeth.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 December 2017

A great start with such a nice write Thanks for sharing...10

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Jazib Kamalvi 27 December 2017

Write comment. Great start, Kathleen. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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