Sun Rise Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

Sun Rise

Rating: 5.0


The air...is still..thick..
Heavy..moist..it..moves..
Around...a dropp of water..
That drips from the moss..
Between...forked..limbs..
Two...Live oaks..split..the..
Skies..sleepy world...to..
Hold open...one lethargic..
Tired..trimed....yellow eye..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Literally poetic. Descriptive, expressive, well percieved and penned.10+

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Marieta Maglas 10 July 2009

Goddesses of all nations of antiquity are better understood as being called 'Solar Gods'..Every word is becoming an attribute, here, and every element of nature is branching off into a distinct personification.Well written poem..10 from me

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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