Like a halo around a hidden beacon
Smears the dawning peak aglow.
Like a peeping red-ripe mango
Soars the ball of coppery-molten blob.
Like a burning match in pitch-black
Scans the shadowy canopy of earth.
Like a widening ripple of golden liquid
Spreads vapoury rays of heavenly orb.
Like a phoenix in tis majestic flight
Spans the fiery wings east to west.
Like a burning furnace of a baker's kiln
Sizzles, the mist over roasting flames.
Like a diamond in a glorious crown
Sparkles and sustains every glade of life.
Like a flickering lamp of providence
Slides the edge with smouldering warmth.
Like a Dhobi-ghat with arrays coloured veils
Splashes vast shades riot of lovely hues.
Like a vermilion mark on a dusky dame
Simmers the sphere descending the horizon.
Like a rosy-cheeked baby about to cry
Smothers its breath, turning orangy-crimson.
Like a blown out celestial candle
Shrouds an' vanishes into smoky-twilight.
Like a blown out celestial candle Shrouds an' vanishes into smoky-twilight. A beautiful poem on different shades of sun.I enjoyed it.Well expressed. Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
I like all the comparisons especially the last two! Like a rosy-cheeked baby about to cry Smothers its breath, turning orangy-crimson. Like a blown out celestial candle Shrouds an' vanishes into smoky-twilight. Fabulous! !
Like a diamond in a glorious crown sun glows with in brown. Sun shines with little more. Shines in far the sea shore.
like a halo around a hidden beacon smears the drawing peak aglow nice writing
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Illustration by similitude is phenomenal.......very well composed......I loved it...10