Sunlight Thick As Fog Poem by Mark Mattson

Sunlight Thick As Fog

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sunlight thick as fog

hot and lazy country days
crunching gravel under bike tires
nothing to deter our venture
nothing to disturb the dream
coasting in this humid drug
in sunlight thick as fog
making our own breeze downhill
in soupy still humid air,
phone wire humming, never still.
gossip buzzing pole to pole.

up Otto's hill, a tough steep climb
sweating wheezing swerving
there to avoid loose gravel
the grader left behind... then
mounting pain relieved some,
cresting, resting now in ease
coasting down in selfmade breeze
that hot and hazy dreamy day
in sunlight thick as fog

Thursday, August 11, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: childhood ,summer,youth
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is a very specific memory from childhood. Riding a bike on gravel roads was an art. Hearing the telephone wire buzzing, the heat of a Nebraska summer day all flood back into focus at my age in the summer.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 11 August 2016

Humid air! ! With the muse of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 August 2016

Hot and hazy dreamy day in sunlight thick as fog comes in childhood as youth for wonderful expressive poem. Amazing.10

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