Surreal Neo-Con Connections Poem by Michael Walkerjohn

Surreal Neo-Con Connections



Occurring Now

freedom runs away
consumed and surrounded dreams
captured creature screams



Spirit's Insist

dance to pipes and drums
arms and eagle's wings believe
nothing', can be changed



Probability

to opened Heaven'
desires dreams proved possible
taking ten steps back



Some Future

once flying eagles
drink of violence prepared
all our freedom' fall



Surreal in Reality

life is passing by
the winds consume all feelings
this land's soul drums wild



Jumping all In

one's desired dreams gone
consumed possibilities
leave, the cliff' alone

Saturday, March 12, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: belief,desire,dreams,feeling,freedom,violence
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
prologue:

freedom runs away, to pipes and drums; taking ten steps back, drink of violence prepared, the winds consume all feelings, one's desired dreams gone...

epilogue:

occurring now, spirit's insist; probability, some future surreal in reality; jumping all in...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dimitrios Galanis 13 March 2016

it's a true poem.You enter the climate described and feel the vividness of its truth.

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Michael Walkerjohn 13 March 2016

Aloha Dimitrios... IAM so blessed that you are on my 6... I reworked this post multiple times to find the continuity that you express... the notes in the end do show of my efforts to coordinate the climate through the read... IAM still learning much about the abilities to transfer the feeling and message needed to pull of a prose that communicates worth to all... now this translation situation takes much more thought and research... but IAM convinced that I will find the way to universally translate this english gibberish over precisely to other mother tongues... I humbly and profoundly thank you for your review and for your thoughts... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two

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