Surroundings-52 Comments

Wonderful, a poem happens as we look around: nature, things, people, etc. Something like what I say in my poems under 'Happenings'. Is the jumbling of words deliberate or contributed by PH? I suspect deliberate. May you educate me.

So sad! Probably the crow must have been inviting its mate or friends to partake of the piece of meat in its beak. The way it secured the piece of meat between the claws while cawing was clever, yet sadly lost it when got intimidated by the presence of a pigeon! Beautiful observation and fine write!

Until a pigeon came too closer, the crow which was frightened flew away. This was amazing sequence observed and imagery was drawn. Revising this poem valued more...10

He crowed for his friends caw, caw Just not the story-way as you expect now But cleverly securing his meat between his claws For several times caw-cawed Until a pigeaon came too closer Frightened the crow flew away Missing his meat.......how a friend can sacrifice his share is nicely being depicted. Beautiful poem. Thank u madam.

A beautiful nature poem dear madam! Words are clubbed up at places still understandable! Enjoy each moment of your life..Stay always blessed....................(Dillip)