Sweet Cascades Poem by Rita Endrina

Sweet Cascades

Rating: 4.2


The graceful dancing twigs
made by the excruciating breeze of the fresh air,
I am completely and clearly relaxed, as clear as the cascading river
How peaceful it is,
making me stay, and vanishing all the aches,
this long neck of mine
letting me see the fascinating view of the nature
How sarcastic it is, the contrast of everything

Friday, December 18, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 24 January 2016

Insightful train of thoughts, well articulated, nicely encapsulated, and subtly penned in poetic diction with conviction. Lovely depiction of the serenity and beauty of nature, in contrast with other other aspects of life. Thanks for sharing Rita. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Manonton Dalan 01 January 2016

mahusay....salamat sige sulat pa

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Dutendra Chamling 21 December 2015

Rita Endrina! Beautiful poem!

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Rita Marie Endrina 02 January 2016

Salamat po!

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Jamie Veloso 18 December 2015

WOW. nice one rit! Great job!

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Rita Marie Endrina 19 December 2015

Hahahha XD

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