The quirky signboard said it in bold
Welcome to the house of Sweet Fragrance
Here your hair will be shaped in the finest mould
While you relax in blissful trance!
I stopped by this name cute and smart
A hair losing shop called Sweet Fragrance
Tempted to go in though I needed no cut
Too impressed to keep a distance!
I stepped into a house with the finest smell
With the pretext to unburden my head of some hair
It was a Garden of Eden away from hell
A dreamy languor pervaded its air!
There wasn’t in the glasses a face to look
The place seemed a haven for the peacefully mute
I was offered a chair in the dimmest lit nook
To surrender myself to the forbidden fruit!
Time stopped blurred away my sight
I felt such bliss had no second chance
Knew why Adam embraced his plight
Succumbed to Eve’s Sweet Fragrance!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Has anyone been so entranced by a visit to the hairdresser? You wax lyrical with shades of the Garden of Eden! I like the originality of the rhymes (double rhyming verses!) and the choice of vocabulary.