Sweet Fragrance Poem by Pradip Chattopadhyay

Sweet Fragrance



The quirky signboard said it in bold
Welcome to the house of Sweet Fragrance
Here your hair will be shaped in the finest mould
While you relax in blissful trance!

I stopped by this name cute and smart
A hair losing shop called Sweet Fragrance
Tempted to go in though I needed no cut
Too impressed to keep a distance!

I stepped into a house with the finest smell
With the pretext to unburden my head of some hair
It was a Garden of Eden away from hell
A dreamy languor pervaded its air!

There wasn’t in the glasses a face to look
The place seemed a haven for the peacefully mute
I was offered a chair in the dimmest lit nook
To surrender myself to the forbidden fruit!

Time stopped blurred away my sight
I felt such bliss had no second chance
Knew why Adam embraced his plight

Succumbed to Eve’s Sweet Fragrance!

Tuesday, November 26, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: hair,house,smart
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susy Evelyne 27 November 2013

Has anyone been so entranced by a visit to the hairdresser? You wax lyrical with shades of the Garden of Eden! I like the originality of the rhymes (double rhyming verses!) and the choice of vocabulary.

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