Sweets...
To infant in arms were promised sweets...
Now is surprised - its father generous
Why his sonny has not stopped cryings...
Many directions within the underpininigs of these few words, T...Cat Hearts comment may have nailed it, yet your penchant for splendidly abstruse & abstractive expression tells me that your audience must dig deep to grasp the exacts of this succinct pen-gem...Your poetic style always presents a pleasant challenge...and never disappoints! Fine Work, young lady! F j R
a nice bribe to the kids to stop them from crying! ! ! Lovely! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Tsira, another excellent write. Though bribing children with sweets does not always work. They are crafty enough to think if it works once they will try it again. Top marks for this beauty and thanks for sharing it with us my friend. Hugs David