Swim Poem by Lamar Cole

Swim

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Jay wanted to learn how to swim.
So that his mother would be so proud of him.
The day came to show his mom his swimming skills.
But seeing her son dog paddle gave his mom a chill.

Saturday, September 2, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: swimming
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rini Shibu 02 September 2017

Sure Mather will be proud of Jay... Well written

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 September 2017

Amazing and observatory poem on swimming is presented here really. Jay wanted to learn swimming as per mom's direction was really interesting. Wisely penned poem is shared.10

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