Sweetness Poem by Lamar Cole

Sweetness

Rating: 5.0


Life was beginning to get her down.
So she started hearing this tantalizing sound.
It said, come to me sweetness this very day.
And I will take all your troubles away.
I will lift you up and give you hope.
But the sound was cleverly disguised highly addictive dope.

Wednesday, October 10, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: drugs,people
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 13 October 2018

I will lift you up and give you hope.....epitome of this sweet and cute poem! Thanks for sharing.......10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 October 2018

This is a brilliant poem on drugs and people having touching expression with nice collocation. Thanks for sharing.10

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Rini shibu 11 October 2018

Let the sweetness come everyday..lovely

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Bernard F. Asuncion 11 October 2018

Lamar, such a powerful poem......................

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