Symbol Of Life Poem by Ratnakar Mandlik

Symbol Of Life

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The weeping of a child
Every newly borned
Is a symbol showing
A life newly formed.
The life to be cut,
By knives to it unknown.
These are the duties
And stark realities,
Which the child must
Follow till he mingles with dust.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 18 August 2019

Follow till he mingles with dust......fantastic poem. Thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.

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Ravi Kopra 01 April 2018

The life to be cut, By knives to it unknown. here may lie the heart of your poem. Make it into a poem. Currently it sounds like dry chopped hay.

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Valsa George 25 August 2016

A child comes into the world weeping! He has to suffer the tortures of life till the end! Once he is out of the amniotic safety of his mother's womb, he has to swim across the shark infested waters....! That is life! You have briefly summed it up!

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 March 2016

Every newly borned. Nice piece of work.

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Ratnakar Mandlik

Ratnakar Mandlik

Hyderabad(A.P.) , India
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