! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***synthesis / Quantum Light ***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***synthesis / Quantum Light ***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 4.7


SYNTHESIS / QUANTUM LIGHT

dream seeks gleams of hope,
dawn reaches goal seeing to sun
warmth rambles over the dew
sparkle spruces its mortal skin

sky is bright steeping in love of rays
vastness is void redounding to blue
moonshine distills waves in ocean
desire bewilders spewing darkness

precision bestirs of completeness
summer cries by pain of inadequacy
green bustles by quantum of light
beauty covertly enriches synthesis

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 16 December 2009

From : Amitava Chakrabarty (Howrah India; Male; 39) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 12/16/2009 8: 23: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : hi Dear Friend 'beauty covertly enriches synthesis' the last line says it all. Well done. You are invited to read any of my poems and if u like the rhyme/rhythm you can proceed to another. cheers amitava

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Lady Grace 16 December 2009

this piece is nicely done..tho, synthesis has many meaning and quantum light has many meanings too, but in this piece it goes hand in hand and make these stanzas beautiful..i like this..smart and expressive..

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Anju Addanki 16 December 2009

its just fantastic. good one

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Shalini Sundararamalingam 16 December 2009

as elayna has said, the poem has good metaphors, and fine structure...

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Dr.subhendu Kar 15 December 2009

From : Elayna Lesabre (Australia ;) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 12/15/2009 11: 10: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Your poem Synthesis/Quantum Light Dear Dr Suhendu Wonderful metaphors - thank you. I especially liked: dream seeks gleams of hope... moonshine distills waves in ocean... precision bestirs of completeness summer cries by pain of inadequacy green bustles by quantum of light beauty covertly enriches synthesis Well written and much appreciated. 'Elayna'

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Rajkamal P.j 21 December 2009

I enjoyed reading...........thoughts flow like a stream..........very nice.......

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djean Whitney 20 December 2009

i really likes this thanks for sharing! ! Great write! !

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Ramesh T A 18 December 2009

Direct expressions of each one's nature is always welcome by all! A best way to express in poetry all things prolific and potential at once without elaboration is very nice indeed!

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Sarah Reamey 17 December 2009

I do enjoy the flow your poem has to it! Very Nice. 10++

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Yaci Pachenco 16 December 2009

like thee flow it has...

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Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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