SYNTHESIS / QUANTUM LIGHT
dream seeks gleams of hope,
dawn reaches goal seeing to sun
warmth rambles over the dew
sparkle spruces its mortal skin
sky is bright steeping in love of rays
vastness is void redounding to blue
moonshine distills waves in ocean
desire bewilders spewing darkness
precision bestirs of completeness
summer cries by pain of inadequacy
green bustles by quantum of light
beauty covertly enriches synthesis
this piece is nicely done..tho, synthesis has many meaning and quantum light has many meanings too, but in this piece it goes hand in hand and make these stanzas beautiful..i like this..smart and expressive..
as elayna has said, the poem has good metaphors, and fine structure...
From : Elayna Lesabre (Australia ;) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 12/15/2009 11: 10: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Your poem Synthesis/Quantum Light Dear Dr Suhendu Wonderful metaphors - thank you. I especially liked: dream seeks gleams of hope... moonshine distills waves in ocean... precision bestirs of completeness summer cries by pain of inadequacy green bustles by quantum of light beauty covertly enriches synthesis Well written and much appreciated. 'Elayna'
I enjoyed reading...........thoughts flow like a stream..........very nice.......
Direct expressions of each one's nature is always welcome by all! A best way to express in poetry all things prolific and potential at once without elaboration is very nice indeed!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
From : Amitava Chakrabarty (Howrah India; Male; 39) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 12/16/2009 8: 23: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : hi Dear Friend 'beauty covertly enriches synthesis' the last line says it all. Well done. You are invited to read any of my poems and if u like the rhyme/rhythm you can proceed to another. cheers amitava