Dr subhendu kar

Gold Star - 6,407 Points (Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India)

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***synthesis / Quantum Light ***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! - Poem by Dr subhendu kar

SYNTHESIS / QUANTUM LIGHT

dream seeks gleams of hope,
dawn reaches goal seeing to sun
warmth rambles over the dew
sparkle spruces its mortal skin

sky is bright steeping in love of rays
vastness is void redounding to blue
moonshine distills waves in ocean
desire bewilders spewing darkness

precision bestirs of completeness
summer cries by pain of inadequacy
green bustles by quantum of light
beauty covertly enriches synthesis


Comments about ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***synthesis / Quantum Light ***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! by Dr subhendu kar

  • Dr.subhendu Kar (12/22/2009 8:46:00 AM)


    From : Linda Winchell (Albion United States; Female; 61)
    To : Dr.subhendu Kar
    Date Time : 12/21/2009 10: 42: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject : Re: hello,

    Yet another great piece of penmenship! Well said. Bravo to you young poet. May God bring you and your's many blessings this season. Linda
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  • (12/21/2009 6:28:00 AM)


    I enjoyed reading...........thoughts flow like a stream..........very nice....... (Report) Reply

  • (12/20/2009 11:22:00 AM)


    i really likes this thanks for sharing! ! Great write! ! (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh T A (12/18/2009 7:20:00 AM)


    Direct expressions of each one's nature is always welcome by all! A best way to express in poetry all things prolific and potential at once without elaboration is very nice indeed! (Report) Reply

  • (12/17/2009 11:57:00 AM)


    I do enjoy the flow your poem has to it!
    Very Nice.
    10++
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  • (12/16/2009 11:12:00 PM)


    like thee flow it has... (Report) Reply

  • Dr.subhendu Kar (12/16/2009 10:35:00 PM)


    From : Amitava Chakrabarty (Howrah India; Male; 39)
    To : Dr.subhendu Kar
    Date Time : 12/16/2009 8: 23: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject : hi

    Dear Friend
    'beauty covertly enriches synthesis'
    the last line says it all. Well done.
    You are invited to read any of my poems and if u like the rhyme/rhythm you can proceed to another.
    cheers

    amitava
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  • (12/16/2009 6:57:00 AM)


    this piece is nicely done..tho, synthesis has many meaning and quantum light has many meanings too, but in this piece it goes hand in hand and make these stanzas beautiful..i like this..smart and expressive.. (Report) Reply

  • (12/16/2009 3:06:00 AM)


    its just fantastic. good one (Report) Reply

  • (12/16/2009 2:42:00 AM)


    as elayna has said, the poem has good metaphors, and fine structure... (Report) Reply

  • Dr.subhendu Kar (12/15/2009 11:17:00 PM)


    From : Elayna Lesabre (Australia ;)
    To : Dr.subhendu Kar
    Date Time : 12/15/2009 11: 10: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject : Your poem Synthesis/Quantum Light

    Dear Dr Suhendu

    Wonderful metaphors - thank you. I especially liked:

    dream seeks gleams of hope...

    moonshine distills waves in ocean...

    precision bestirs of completeness
    summer cries by pain of inadequacy
    green bustles by quantum of light
    beauty
    covertly enriches synthesis

    Well written and much appreciated.

    'Elayna'
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  • (12/15/2009 10:56:00 PM)


    Congratulations; but the poem is above my understanding.

    Quite a mix-up of thoughts synthesized by the micro quantum mechanics as light.
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  • (12/14/2009 3:06:00 PM)


    That was very beautiful. Great job.10. (Report) Reply

  • (12/14/2009 11:18:00 AM)


    subhendu, - Mystery of quantum romanticism. Very beautifully..10...
    Tsira
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  • (12/14/2009 7:38:00 AM)


    precision bestirs of completeness
    summer cries by pain of inadequacy
    green bustles by quantum of light
    beauty covertly enriches synthesis

    well done dear friend..this is really a rich poem with many symbolic indicators..what i love in your poetry is the sweet composition of words and proper link or verses... well done..loved it.
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  • (12/13/2009 4:44:00 PM)


    You are an amazing poet! 'Dream seek gleams of hope; dawn reaches goal seeing to sun' all forms of life in the world seems to balance even in its dualism in mind and matter. great poem a 10+++ (Report) Reply

  • (12/12/2009 4:12:00 PM)


    You painted that beyond the beauty and I found the word in my small vocabulary is 'Exceptional'. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 12, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, December 13, 2009


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