Take Me Away Poem by Champion Chris
Take Me Away
You've held my hand, and kissed my lips
Sent jolts of lightning, through my fingertips
Love has combined, with the hatred within
You've made me alive, resurrected again
You were the one, that called from the light
To me from the darkness, bring me back from the fight
We met unnaturally, in a place of determination
My heart quickly opened, for your divinity concentration
Now that you've read this, surely you know
This is more than a revelation, this is to show
So take me away, from this hell
And show me true love, outside of this cell
My heart is resurrected, my powers regained
I want to take your hand, and kiss you in the rain
I like this Chris. Especially the ending. Your poems are maturing. Feeling loved is the greatest source of joy anyone can possibly experience. It helps us to get right down into the core of our being and understand what makes us tick...so let it flourish while it can!
a nice romantic poem with good Rhyming always takes my attention. Perfect work Chris. C.A
For me a bizarre feeling un-describable..meaningfully helical enjoyed much..tenner In MPL wow ~ niv PS Please comment on my poem 'I Want To Be Raped' [14 words poetry]..PH banned it ultimately gave in. n
I fully agree with Bella Hernandez, your are really gifted and have a ways with penning words that clearly bring beauty and talent magically blended in each one of your works! 10+++ Thank you for sharing this wonderful writhe and keep it up! This your stepping stone toward the top of the Poetry World one day! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!
OMG! ! ! ! such beauty, love, passion, witthin this perfected poem! ! ! i love this whole poem! ! ! its on my fav list :) you are a really great poet from what i read so far... i am humble to read upon perfection! ! ! ~Bella
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I would like to translate this poem
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What a beautiful poem, thanks for sharing it with us all.