Champion Chris

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Take Me Away - Poem by Champion Chris

You've held my hand, and kissed my lips
Sent jolts of lightning, through my fingertips

Love has combined, with the hatred within
You've made me alive, resurrected again

You were the one, that called from the light
To me from the darkness, bring me back from the fight

We met unnaturally, in a place of determination
My heart quickly opened, for your divinity concentration

Now that you've read this, surely you know
This is more than a revelation, this is to show

So take me away, from this hell
And show me true love, outside of this cell

My heart is resurrected, my powers regained
I want to take your hand, and kiss you in the rain


Poet's Notes about The Poem

This is about the one. The one girl that gives emotions of love and trust. She will feel very honored once she reads it.

Comments about Take Me Away by Champion Chris

  • Ellias Anderson Jr. (7/24/2012 12:33:00 AM)


    a nice romantic poem with good Rhyming always takes my attention. Perfect work Chris.
    C.A
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  • (4/29/2012 12:56:00 PM)


    For me a bizarre feeling un-describable..meaningfully helical enjoyed much..tenner In MPL wow ~ niv


    PS Please comment on my poem 'I Want To Be Raped' [14 words poetry]..PH banned it ultimately gave in.
    n
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  • Romeo Della Valle (4/20/2012 7:11:00 PM)


    I fully agree with Bella Hernandez, your are really gifted and have a ways with penning words that clearly bring beauty and talent magically blended in each one of your works! 10+++ Thank you for sharing this wonderful writhe and keep it up! This your stepping stone toward the top of the Poetry World one day! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! (Report) Reply

  • (4/16/2012 6:29:00 PM)


    OMG! ! ! ! such beauty, love, passion, witthin this perfected poem! ! !
    i love this whole poem! ! ! its on my fav list :)
    you are a really great poet from what i read so far...
    i am humble to read upon perfection! ! !
    ~Bella
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  • (4/16/2012 8:19:00 AM)


    this is very beautiful. thanks for sharing. keep writing chris (Report) Reply

  • Sara Fielder (4/12/2012 6:21:00 PM)


    I like this Chris. Especially the ending. Your poems are maturing. Feeling loved is the greatest source of joy anyone can possibly experience. It helps us to get right down into the core of our being and understand what makes us tick...so let it flourish while it can! (Report) Reply

  • (4/12/2012 3:11:00 PM)


    What a beautiful poem, thanks for sharing it with us all. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 12, 2012

Poem Edited: Monday, April 16, 2012


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