Take Us To The Death! Poem by Vikas Tripathi

Take Us To The Death!



All the age we died everyday
With a lot of pain all the time;
Let us enjoy each moment
With natural-love and friend's rhyme.

Our bones has become weak
By the weight of useless books;
Acids has burnt our lives,
Let us free from life-hooks.

Our childhood has been already gone,
The teen-age is ahead going;
Our destiny is asking to us,
‘Here, what are you doing? '

Let us fly in the open sky,
We will be good, it's our faith;
Let us enjoy the love of life,
Otherwise, take us to the death!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vikas Tripathi 14 April 2012

Thans A Lot To Both Of You........

1 0 Reply
Pankajam K 17 March 2012

Yearning for change in the system is presented strongly. Expressing it boldly.

1 0 Reply
Rajendran Muthiah 17 March 2012

O you teen-ager poet! You demand an educational system which saves you from carrying loads of books. Your destiny urges you to do something marvellous. You convey fantastic ideas through your poem. Cheers!

1 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success