David KUSH

Gold Star - 12,099 Points (December 24 / south bend indiana)

Taken Away

Poem by David KUSH

Somethings in life
Are given to us
Just to be taken away
A life, friend or a love
We don't understand why?
One thing for sure
Without having that thing
Even for a short time
Our lives would never be
COMPLETE


Comments about Taken Away by David KUSH

  • Manonton Dalan (1/24/2016 1:55:00 PM)

    sometimes we lost to gain
    something of importance
    only most of us are blind(Report)Reply

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  • Pradip Chattopadhyay (8/17/2013 12:08:00 PM)

    so true! whenever we lose a beloved, a part of us is lost.
    penned it fine, poet.(Report)Reply

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  • Lyn PaulLyn Paul (8/17/2013 8:55:00 AM)

    The lessons can be very hard but what we gain from these can never be taken away from us. as cruel as they may be. Thank you(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 17, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, August 21, 2013