Taking Advantage Poem by Lamar Cole

Taking Advantage

Rating: 5.0


Everything was going wrong.
When his best friend came over to visit.
He just wouldn't go home.
He would stay for many hours at a time.
He would eat all of his food.

And drink all his beer and wine.
His best friend had become a pain in the butt.
To let his best friend take advantage of him like this.
He had to be a nut.

Saturday, June 30, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: friends,people
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 01 July 2018

Such a great poem, Lamar...10++++

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Rini shibu 30 June 2018

Better to end such friendship which cause pain atleast you will be happy

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Robert Murray Smith 30 June 2018

We are all nuts but of different kinds. Brazil nuts come from.... Cashews mixed with peanuts are nuts, too.++10 Robert Nutty

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 June 2018

Everything when goes wrong it provokes thought. A best friend becomes gives pain in wrong condition. But we hope best friend should be helpful. An amazing perceptional poem is shared...10

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