Tuesday, January 10, 2012
Tanka - Black Moon Comments
Rating: ★5.0
A dark moon rising
mirrors despair upon the lake.
Black covers the waves,
smothering the winter light.
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Hans Vr
23 January 2012
The dark night, mirrors despair, drowning the dreams of hope. Such a beautiful expression of feelings. I think this is a superb tanka, Lynn, extremely well written. A full 10
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12/7/2025 11:19:49 AM # 1.0.0
Beautiful. I'm not really good at analyzing poetry, but this one touched deep.