Tanka - Black Moon Poem by Lynn Kincade

Tanka - Black Moon

Rating: 5.0


A dark moon rising
mirrors despair upon the lake.
Black covers the waves,
smothering the winter light.
Drowning dreams of hope

Tuesday, January 10, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: dark,despair,winter
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Christian Rivera 05 February 2012

Beautiful. I'm not really good at analyzing poetry, but this one touched deep.

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Hans Vr 23 January 2012

The dark night, mirrors despair, drowning the dreams of hope. Such a beautiful expression of feelings. I think this is a superb tanka, Lynn, extremely well written. A full 10

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Jerry Hughes 23 January 2012

...nice flow Lynn. Cheers, Jerry

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