Tanka-I Poem by Shreej k.c

Tanka-I



Tanka-I

alfresco wood pub
wildfire at the distant hill
blends with dusky sky
you add more ice in liquor
and flick the cigarette butt

Sunday, May 8, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: human,nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
First attempt of writing Tanka.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fabrizio Frosini 08 May 2016

:) your first attempt was good. The second is better, but this one is not bad.. not bad at all, dear doctor, .. ;)

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