Tanka-Ii Poem by Shreej k.c

Tanka-Ii



Tanka-II

cloying prayer songs
costly offerings to god
temple bell gongs loud
trying to remind us of
the begging child we bypassed

Sunday, May 8, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: human
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fabrizio Frosini 08 May 2016

this is a very good one! BRAVA! ;)

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Shreej K.c 08 May 2016

Glad that I got one! Hmm I must have learnt from a good teacher 😉

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