Tanka: Luminescent Magic Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Tanka: Luminescent Magic

Rating: 5.0


Light dancing softly

upon fluffy clouded sky

pastel arc misting

red, orange, yellow, green, blue

indigo, violet and dreams

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Gieske 05 February 2009

The first two lines create a very pleasing picture. Dreams, at the end, is a refreching surprise and takes us back up into the clouds.

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