Tanka ~ Our Love Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Tanka ~ Our Love

Rating: 5.0


where the earth meets sky
numerous stars of our love
illuminating
like a floating galaxy
a trail of relationship

Friday, June 18, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: cute love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 18 June 2021

A good message sir. Indeed a floating galaxy. A hopeful relationship imprints...a suggestion....illuminates, like a floating hub, where galaxial relationship curb, making it to bulge, bearing on its surge, meant to launch, life in bunch, missing none, that we have won.

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Zumas Millamo 19 June 2021

Fabulous tanka.

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Deepak S S 24 June 2021

Grrrr8 write again\\\\\

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Juhaina Tumlu 18 August 2021

Amusing Tanka...Cleverest.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 August 2021

Wonderful Tanka about Our Love (yours and your love) Indeed Mr. Asim Sir, I can see your love floating in the galaxy like a floating galaxy, how wonderously put! 5 Stars full on Top, Sir!

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mamta S 30 July 2021

Fabulous tanka.

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Poetic Sky 26 June 2021

Wonderful Tanka. I enjoyed reading it.

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Zoyza Da Vinka 25 June 2021

Ex c lent a trail of relationship...

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