Tanka: Softly Dreaming Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Tanka: Softly Dreaming

Rating: 5.0


Silence of dreamers

soundless space no echoes pierce

the tranquil stardust

twilight lingers a second

then drifts in sacred embrace

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 29 December 2016

Total Solar Eclipse Spans Over Two Hours spiritual mystical wax feelings lyrical haunting heart strings vibrant beautiful imagination keynotes solar eclipse lips natural supernatural astronomical ecliptical total solar eclipse red extensive coronal filiaments an aura of plasma surrounds the sun other stars our Sun's corona extends millions of kilometres into space easily seen during a total solar eclipse a garland wreath crown life giving sun adorns ancient civilizations considered supernatural bad omens frightening their sun disappearing during the day as the sky darkens in minutes looking too long into corona sun direct lead to curse permanent eye damage or blindness total solar eclipse fear unexplained terrifying watching sun slowly bite eaten gone 7.5 minutes Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Tanka: Softly Dreaming' by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black. Dedicated to Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black.

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Thank you..your poem is beautiful..

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Terry Craddock 04 December 2016

spiritual and mystical, haunting heart strings of imagination, beautiful

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Whitney Nicole Albright* 01 March 2009

Very short and soothing.

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