Tanka ~ To Unknow Destination Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Tanka ~ To Unknow Destination

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mind far from the shore
sails on the ecstatic waves
with the ocean breeze
beneath a cluster of clouds
to unknow destination ~

Friday, May 13, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: journey
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Suzon Albert 13 May 2022

Calming and soothing tanka. Introspection is way to visit and revisit self.

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Richard Wlodarski 15 May 2022

The inner journey is the most rewarding. Another brilliant tanka, Dr. Nehal.

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M. Asim Nehal 16 May 2022

Thank u so much for your heartwarming comments...

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Nabakishore Dash 15 May 2022

Beautiful Tanka Dear Dr. Nehal.

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Juhaina Tumlu 13 May 2022

On a spiritual journey. So very thoughtful.

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Mamta S 13 May 2022

Majestic Tanka. It has everything about life's journey.

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Martinez Salotori 13 May 2022

It can be a great Haiku in itself mind far from the shore sails on the ecstatic waves with the ocean breeze

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