now is the time
to merge in the ocean
of love and survive the waves
and grow old together
before the leaves fall and fly
I love the last two lines. Thsy remind me of my parents Bravo!
A marvelous Tanka that captures the very essence of love. Great imagery. Congratulations for the POTD.
Beautiful, fabulous, marvellous tanka! Love is the essence of life! Loved it......100! ! !
Dear Asim ji, how marvellous to see your poem as the Poem of the day. Heartiest Congratulations!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Loveliest Tanka about Time, about growing old together, so sweetest Dr. M. Asim Nehal Sir. Most deserving TMPOTD.5 Stars Sir