Tanka ~ Time Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Tanka ~ Time

Rating: 5.0


now is the time
to merge in the ocean
of love and survive the waves
and grow old together
before the leaves fall and fly

Sunday, December 12, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: lessons of life,journey
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 12 December 2021

Loveliest Tanka about Time, about growing old together, so sweetest Dr. M. Asim Nehal Sir. Most deserving TMPOTD.5 Stars Sir

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 12 December 2021

I love the last two lines. Thsy remind me of my parents Bravo!

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David Wood 12 December 2021

A beautiful Tanka on later life.5*

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 December 2021

A marvelous Tanka that captures the very essence of love. Great imagery. Congratulations for the POTD.

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Bharati Nayak 12 December 2021

Wow---Such a beautiful Tanka!

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Zoyza Da Vinka 18 December 2021

Excellent Tanka.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 12 December 2021

Beautiful, fabulous, marvellous tanka! Love is the essence of life! Loved it......100! ! !

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 12 December 2021

Dear Asim ji, how marvellous to see your poem as the Poem of the day. Heartiest Congratulations!

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Mamta S 12 December 2021

Wisely thought. 💘

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me poet yeps poet 12 December 2021

TOO GOOD

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