Chuy Amante

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Tasty Sounds Whispered - Poem by Chuy Amante

the sugary bliss
that springs forth
from your mouth
has a freedom flavor
when whispered
if it weren't for my tongue and nose
inhaling your quiet light,
I'd never hear of it
nor bask in its noiseless vision

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Poet's Notes about The Poem

sensory silliness inspired by Hafiz

Comments about Tasty Sounds Whispered by Chuy Amante

  • Adeline FosterAdeline Foster (6/11/2015 5:50:00 PM)

    Interesting format. Enjoyed this poem. Read mine - Who Am I -

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  • Michael McparlandMichael Mcparland (3/25/2015 12:09:00 AM)

    Tis the sweetest flavor of all yes? Words of love and freedom so longedd for are the most fulfilling. :) (Report)Reply

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  • Amitava SurAmitava Sur (3/21/2015 6:28:00 AM)

    Does it mean that Any wish whether a bliss or love cannot be accepted or felt if it is not received wholeheartedly, ie, through all senses of body and mind? ? If it is then it's very true. (Report)Reply

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  • * Sunprincess * (3/11/2015 12:25:00 PM)

    .......nice ink! ! ! ....a poem with sweet taste and sound...keep penning ★ (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 10, 2015

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