Tears Poem by breeanna mcelmurry

Tears

Rating: 5.0


I try to stop the tears. but they just dont stop. I just dont get it god took you to soon. I pray at night that you will come back but you dont come back. No matter how long i pray for you will never come home. You were my best friend and lover. Now that he took you i dont have a best friend or a lover. I will always love you.


To: all Those who lost there best friend or lover. im so sorry if u did..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Surayya Abbas 16 April 2009

Lovely lines. Deep love for best friend.

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Wildan F Rabbani 23 March 2009

I love it! ! ! but I'm Indonesian I don't understand about English that much I'm still studying Do you know about normal tears and icy tears? ?

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Jerry Abrahamson 21 March 2009

Very Emotional. I love it.

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MuRdA RhEE 20 March 2009

i LiKe... lol Makez me reminisce about the past a lil

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~ Jon London ~ 19 March 2009

This is so emotional, your heart wrote every word. Lovely piece

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