Tears Are Falling Comments

I really like this poem

I disagree with Chinedu. The heartache is often overwhelming and you should try to go deeper to describe it than saying it hurts a lot. I know words can't fully describe the emotional torment of lost love, but just saying it is painful and it made me cry, makes it sound more like a stubbed toe. Reach deep, Jen, go beyond the cliché and bare your soul through poetry' Peace

In some unpleasant stories of love, we see tragedies in bliss of love. Love is a spiritual experience, it's also whimsical and temperamental, coming unannounced and may leave without warning. A nice piece of poetry, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and insightfully penned from inner recesses of the heart. A good poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. ➕9