Tears On My Pillow Poem by Falusi Mobolaji

Tears On My Pillow

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Pretending that I feel fine
A smile covers despair
Sadness is easily hidden
No one would be aware

I go off into a quiet place
When I am feeling low
There I shall cry for hours
No one would ever know

Its easy masking sorrow
If I keep it out of sight
Weeping tears in silence
As I hug my pillow tight

Only my pillow will know
Tears I cried over you
Heartache is never heard
When hidden from view

Those tears on my pillow
Shall be shed silently
Yearning goes unnoticed
Its hurt you cannot see

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Israh Sadan 01 August 2008

A nice simple rhyme to express emotion very well. I'm sorry that you're so sad.

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Jessica Frame 01 August 2008

wow. this poem is full of vulnerability... well written and expressed

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James B. Earley 18 August 2008

A passionate message of pain and sorrow....vividly expressed!

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Rachel The Hair Guru 04 August 2008

The words flow so beautifully. Nice work.

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foxy babii 02 August 2008

wow this is so true so me an so deep great poem i love it

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Bianca B. 01 August 2008

This poem is beautiful. Lovely!

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Katherine Sessor 01 August 2008

Beautiful poem! You express your feelings very well and have great imagery! I too, am sorry your sad. i know how you feel. Keep up the great writing! Kat, =)

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