Tell You Both Poem by ESPN CHICK

Tell You Both



I just can't get you out of my mind
I dream about you all the time
Not a day that goes by I don't think about you
And I don't know what to do

Cause its killing me now
I'm falling in love
With someone I don't even know

And how can this be how can I fall for two guys
Both mean a lot to me and I can't explain it
I guess I'll have to flip a coin
Cause I can't choose just one

I fell now into a hole and I can't get out
If only you two could read my mind
Read how I think about you both all the time

How can it be that I've fallen in love with someone like you
You're great and I don't know how to explain this feeling for you
I wish I could tell you both how amazing you both are
And every step that I take I ponder on my feelings for you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom J. Mariani 16 December 2007

This poem could go a couple of ways. Right now it's not clear if it's about two guys or just one with two personalities - -and you've fallen in love with both anf have doubts. Decide what you want to say, then tighten up, revise your poem, to say that. Now it's not clear. Good work in progress. Tom

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