ESPN CHICK

A Girl Like Me

I wonder why I can't die
Cause I'm filled with pain
Broken all over the place

And I'm still here in this flesh
Still moving when I should be six feet under

I tried hard to die but I'm still here
Knowing no one will miss me
Even though I wish he would miss me

Cause he meant everything to me
I wish he knew the way I felt

But he never will
Not till the day I die
Even though I have tried to tell him

I don't think he would ever love a girl like me
A girl who wishes she was dead

A girl who is broken inside and out
He would never love a girl like me
Therefore he can never know how I feel till the end of my time

January 6,2008


Not good i know but who cares

Poem Submitted: Monday, January 7, 2008

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Comments about A Girl Like Me by ESPN CHICK

  • Jerry Hughes (5/17/2010 4:45:00 PM)

    ......self-indulgent, badly written rubbish!

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  • Ken E Hall (8/3/2009 5:59:00 AM)

    A sad poem from one so young with unrequited love
    a very good subject you can feel....when Mr Right comes
    get ready with the magic carpet.......
    regards

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  • Alan CurtisAlan Curtis (5/3/2009 10:28:00 PM)

    A grl like u is one of a kind, there will always b someone that actualy does care for u.

    Keep on keep'n on home grl,
    Hippy Sav

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  • Greenwolfe 1962 (4/1/2009 10:39:00 PM)

    Now don't say that. I thought your structure was just fine. Structure makes a poem easy to read. That's what your poem was. I enjoyed reading it so much
    that I actually wanted to read more. Your message was clear and sincere.
    I could feel the heartbreak. Just a wonderful writing.

    GW62

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  • Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (3/30/2009 9:04:00 PM)

    young lady. some lucky fella woudl be just lucky to have you as his bride.

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  • Christian Guice (3/6/2009 9:50:00 PM)

    deep very good poem i like it alot

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  • *Trusting You* (11/8/2008 1:00:00 AM)

    there is a man out there waiting for you to peice you back together.
    I like your last stanza. good job.
    *Purkey Girl*

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  • Mifael Llauderes (10/31/2008 10:42:00 PM)

    i agree with barbara... in time, all that pieces will settle into their fitting places.
    keep writing
    keep pouring it out
    people can relate to you
    people care

    God bless

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  • Egi David Perdana (9/20/2008 11:07:00 PM)

    a girl like you is you mother or you sister

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  • Barbara Terry (6/3/2008 6:09:00 PM)

    I like the last line, and when I started to post my poems, everyone tried to tell me that it was written wrong. Poetry today tells about our lives, and what we are going, or have gone through. This is a very well written piece and says so much about why others don't listen when we talk. Thank you for sharing, but I believe that there is someone out there for a girl like you.

    Love & hugs,
    Barbara

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  • Gregory Collins (5/22/2008 10:21:00 PM)

    if you know how much you wanted to die, you would not be broken all over the place, , so, before you get sad, read frank stanford, then rethink all your poems, cause they just aint sad. maybe that is what is dragging into the open fire, because you must beware of the passenger, you must DO DAMAGE TO the BRAIN WHILE RAISING A FLOWER OF FIRE, nice try except to the fact there is something wrong, but i am not bob dyland, just a funkey uselss american

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  • Lime and Tequila with a Splash of Pineapple (1/30/2008 12:03:00 AM)

    A very moving poem, it's hard to believe in love when you feel like jagged glass inside.

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  • Anjali Mandokhot (1/7/2008 11:38:00 PM)

    so expressive of the real feelings of yearning....tnx 4 sharing

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