Evy Moore

Temptation

Alone in the darkness my true fate lies
Where evil rules and hatred never dies
The trick he uses is sweet temptation
But the price to pay is eternal damnation
He gave me the venom and gave me the knife
And he told me to end my once wretched life

Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 29, 2006
Poem Edited: Saturday, August 28, 2010

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Comments about Temptation by Evy Moore

  • Nicole Kelley (9/12/2006 5:05:00 PM)

    Evy, this is a wonderful...me and you have alot in common...keep on writing....

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  • Leo Lopes (9/11/2006 11:21:00 PM)

    Another cool poem if i may say so myself ;)

    'Alone in the darkness my true fate lies
    where evil rules and hatred never dies'

    I can see you think similar to me
    ...And you know what they say.......... Great minds think alike

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  • Daniel Nairn (9/11/2006 10:29:00 PM)

    One of your best poems, definitely...

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  • Patricia Gale (9/11/2006 5:30:00 PM)

    Fantastic lines... the venom.. evil rules and heatred never dies..... such deep from so few words.

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  • David Gerardino (9/11/2006 4:12:00 PM)

    He gave me the venom and gave me the knife, great line..............

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  • Dee Daffodil (9/11/2006 8:43:00 AM)

    Get thee behind me Satan...and push.... You certainly have a way with words, this one is dark and moody. Seems to be a common theme here.
    Dee

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