Not sure If Im deserving of a Thank you
NOt really sure what I should say back to you
A Thank you Here A Thank you There
Please dont Thank me Cause im not happy here
Not really trying to be mean, just a little confussed
Not saying as a joke, if you think so please dont be amused
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
. This short, succinct, powerful poem reflects the brutal reality of War and the severe emotional toll and ravages...it inflicts on all Soldiers. It is so understandable, when, at times, a 'Thank you! ' is TOO much of an out-of touch, bubblegum, alien...niceity, for a brave Man (who's in the midst of Hell) ...to hear. ''Oh, Lord! What mayhem + tragedies, those eyes of yours, must see.'' Daniel, your words are riveting! ! ! ! ! (A limit of only 10 marks...seems so un-fair. This poem is a Blue Ribbon Winner!) Deanna .