That Kiss Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

That Kiss

Rating: 5.0


that kiss
i would'nt forget
amidst our sleeping kids
under the covered bed sheet
that kiss
i would'nt forget
it was almost a bite
only.....
i donot know
before your leaving
i did not know
if it was a hit or a miss
i only wish
i don't loose you for good
i have told you
'you made me a man'
'you did make me confident'
now........
don't just break me and go away

[this is for god to read]

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 26 May 2009

A nice composition, the idea is wonderful.

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Miriam Maia Padua 26 May 2009

This a very good write Sam... really good...lovely God will be happy reading this.. very touching written with all sincerity..i can feel it with innocence... God is forever with us... 10+++++ i love this piece Sam.. _maia_

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