Tuesday, February 28, 2012

That Old Man... Comments

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that old man...
wakes up every morning,
greets death with a scowl.
shuffles barefoot to the bathroom,
...
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Eric Cockrell
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Smoky Hoss 28 February 2012

Very, very good; that last line really hit me, right-on! ! !

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Dave Walker 28 February 2012

Like it, sometimes we can end up like this before our time. We got to keep living. Great poem.

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 28 February 2012

life poem))))) about my father ha ha ha...joke. your poem is very nice, i like it))))) i like your easy style of writing

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