Anthony Charles King

Rookie (02-04-1966 / Glasgow, Scotland)

That Rainy Morning - Poem by Anthony Charles King

that rainy morning
shrouded in sweet darkness
i lit the fire and let the flames discover your beauty

we were mad then...
deliciously mad

and we whispered about love
you said-'an invitation to larceny'
i said - 'a proclamation of lunacy'

you were ticklish and you laughed that crazy, meniacle laugh
.that one that i learned to love
....that one that is silent now

as you turned towards me
as i turned to meet you

Comments about That Rainy Morning by Anthony Charles King

  • (5/9/2006 4:28:00 PM)

    i think you could have done more with this- it had great potential. i wanted to like it, more than how it was written, however. i'm not sure what it needs- i guess lines are a bit jaded (& i kno my work is too at times, thats how i recognize it) . you did paint a vivid picture with your array of words here & it was refreshing in that it was simple & straightfoward. keep up- best care, sus. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 9, 2006

Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 10, 2006

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