Edwin Tanguma

Gold Star - 5,349 Points (2-16-1966 / CA)

That Young Guy Has Skill - Poem by Edwin Tanguma

That Young Guy Has Skill

I'm standing outside
In the pouring rain
My heart is broken
And I'm filled with pain

How could you do it
You are such a witch
I'f I were colder
I'd call you a bit**

I'll not sink that low
Although others might
I will not go there
I don't want to fight

You can go your way
And I will go mine
I know in the end
I will be just fine

So enjoy your life
As I'm sure I will
Some people might say
That young guy has skill

I'm glad I met you
I've learned quite a bit
You have helped me hone
And sharpen my wit

. 1/11/2017

Topic(s) of this poem: silly


Poet's Notes about The Poem

I was quite bored and it has been raining quite a bit here where I am at...And I started thinking about things and one thing led to another...lol...This poem is the result...hehehe...I hope ya'll like it...rofl

Comments about That Young Guy Has Skill by Edwin Tanguma

  • Terry Craddock (1/31/2017 11:59:00 PM)


    Seek Out Multiple Treasure Location Rainbows

    when the cold wind blows
    when life hard heavy rains
    when it rains it drowning pours
    worse with cold hard winter rains
    dress warm for cloudburst rainstorms
    when the rain at last passes finally goes
    when the rain last lingering drop expires
    when first sunlight breaks through clouds
    seek out multiple treasure location rainbows

    Copyright © Terence George Craddock
    Inspired by the poem 'That Young Guy Has Skill' by the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi.
    Dedicated to the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi.
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  • Terry Craddock (1/31/2017 11:58:00 PM)


    When The Cold Rain Comes

    life rains hard heavy chores
    when it rains it thunderclap pours
    worse with cold hard winter rain
    ice rain stings flesh like needle pain
    when a bright sun comes out it shines
    life is easier outside when a warm sun shines

    Copyright © Terence George Craddock
    Inspired by the poem 'That Young Guy Has Skill' by the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi.
    Dedicated to the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi.
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  • Terry Craddock (1/31/2017 11:58:00 PM)


    A Cloudburst Rainstorm Weather Expended Passes

    when a cloudburst rainstorm passes
    when the rain passes finally goes
    when the rain last drop expires
    when first sunlight breaks
    through split clouds
    seek out rare jewels

    glittering sparkling diamonds
    shimmer water droplet diamonds
    water glistening on spider webs
    seek out spectrum multiple treasures
    pot of gold sunlit location rainbows
    hide in mist repainted common places

    Copyright © Terence George Craddock
    Inspired by the poem 'That Young Guy Has Skill' by the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi.
    Dedicated to the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi.
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  • Terry Craddock (1/31/2017 11:57:00 PM)


    Storm Squalls Lash Assaulted Land In Passing

    melting overhead heavy cloud blackness
    melting water saturated vapour darkness
    melting dew point stretched tight clouds
    in sheets downpouring driven wind rains
    in gravity earth diving liquid droplets
    in earth impact falling hitting waters
    wet lands past dry suddenly sodden floods
    wet rain fed rivers overflowing burst banks;
    when a cloudburst rainstorm passes
    when the rain passes finally goes
    when the rain last drop expires
    when first ray sunlight breaks
    through thin split spent clouds
    seek out rare droplet jewels;

    Copyright © Terence George Craddock
    Inspired by the poem 'That Young Guy Has Skill' by the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi.
    Dedicated to the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi.
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  • Terry Craddock (1/31/2017 11:57:00 PM)


    Melting Heavy Black Rainclouds Dissolving

    melting overhead heavy cloud blackness
    melting water saturated vapour darkness
    melting dew point stretched tight clouds

    Copyright © Terence George Craddock
    Inspired by the poem 'That Young Guy Has Skill' by the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi.
    Dedicated to the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi.
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  • Terry Craddock (1/31/2017 11:56:00 PM)


    Rain Droplet Diversity Stories

    in sheets downpouring driven wind rains
    in gravity freefall earth diving liquid droplets
    in earth impact falling hitting splash waters

    Copyright © Terence George Craddock
    Inspired by the poem 'That Young Guy Has Skill' by the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi.
    Dedicated to the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi.
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  • Terry Craddock (1/31/2017 11:56:00 PM)


    Dry Land Flood Transition Recipes

    wet lands past dry suddenly sodden floods
    wet rain fed rivers overflowing burst banks
    when a cloudburst rainstorm angry passes

    Copyright © Terence George Craddock
    Inspired by the poem 'That Young Guy Has Skill' by the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi.
    Dedicated to the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi.
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  • Terry Craddock (1/31/2017 11:55:00 PM)


    Miracle Moments When Rare Droplet Jewels Grow

    when the rain storm spent passes finally goes
    when the rain continuous falling last drop expires
    when first ray sunlight breaks split spent clouds

    Copyright © Terence George Craddock
    Inspired by the poem 'That Young Guy Has Skill' by the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi.
    Dedicated to the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi.
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  • Terry Craddock (1/31/2017 11:54:00 PM)


    A World Transformed In Soup Grey Mist Fog

    in the mist fog light is feast swallowed
    water haze hides sharp distance visibility
    a world transformed in soup grey mist fog

    Copyright © Terence George Craddock
    Inspired by the poem 'That Young Guy Has Skill' by the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi.
    Dedicated to the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi.
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  • Terry Craddock (1/31/2017 11:54:00 PM)


    Cloud Land Mist Prison Banks

    time passes minutes hours sun above clouds shining
    above cast down ground cloud land mist prison banks
    slow wind breeze soft blows or sun mist fog burning

    Copyright © Terence George Craddock
    Inspired by the poem 'That Young Guy Has Skill' by the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi.
    Dedicated to the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi.
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  • Terry Craddock (1/31/2017 11:51:00 PM)


    Treasure Hunt Jewels Bestowed In Past Mist Dark Corners

    sun mist shine through eaten vapour time mist fog banks
    day dawns late in countryside cityscape sun warmed scenes
    treasure hunt jewels are bestowed in past mist dark corners

    Copyright © Terence George Craddock
    Inspired by the poem 'That Young Guy Has Skill' by the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi.
    Dedicated to the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi.
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  • Terry Craddock (1/31/2017 11:51:00 PM)


    Shimmer Water Droplet Diamonds

    glittering sparkling diamonds
    shimmer water droplet diamonds
    water glistening on spider webs

    Copyright © Terence George Craddock
    Inspired by the poem 'That Young Guy Has Skill' by the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi.
    Dedicated to the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi.
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  • Terry Craddock (1/31/2017 11:50:00 PM)


    Mist Repainted Common Places

    seek out spectrum multiple treasures
    pot of gold sunlit location rainbows
    hide in mist repainted common places

    Copyright © Terence George Craddock
    Inspired by the poem 'That Young Guy Has Skill' by the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi.
    Dedicated to the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi.
    (Report) Reply

  • Terry Craddock (1/31/2017 11:50:00 PM)


    Land Birth Renewal Greetings

    land birth renewal greets happy child dancing eyes
    land birth renewal greets scan scene painting eyes
    land birth renewal greets writer poet whispering eyes

    Copyright © Terence George Craddock
    Inspired by the poem 'That Young Guy Has Skill' by the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi.
    Dedicated to the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi.
    (Report) Reply

  • Terry Craddock (1/31/2017 11:49:00 PM)


    The Sun Miracle Time Remakes Mist World Fog

    in the mist fog light is feast swallowed
    water haze hides sharp distance visibility
    a world transformed in grey mist fog

    time passes minutes hours sun above clouds shining
    above cast down ground cloud land mist prison banks
    slow wind breeze soft blows or sun mist fog burning

    sun mist shine through eaten vapour time mist fog banks
    day dawns late in countryside cityscape sun warmed scenes
    treasure hunt jewels are bestowed in past mist dark corners

    glittering sparkling diamonds
    shimmer water droplet diamonds
    water glistening on spider webs

    seek out spectrum multiple treasures
    pot of gold sunlit location rainbows
    hide in mist repainted common places

    land birth renewal greets happy child dancing eyes
    land birth renewal greets scan scene painting eyes
    land birth renewal greets writer poet whispering eyes

    Copyright © Terence George Craddock
    Inspired by the poem 'That Young Guy Has Skill' by the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi.
    Dedicated to the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi.
    (Report) Reply

  • Terry Craddock (1/11/2017 11:19:00 PM)


    'I'm standing outside
    In the pouring rain
    My heart is broken
    And I'm filled with pain'

    life rains hard heavy, when it rains it pours, worse with cold hard winter rain
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 11, 2017

Poem Edited: Tuesday, January 17, 2017


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