The Abyss Poem by Daya Nandan

The Abyss

Rating: 5.0


I stared at the abyss and the abyss stared back,
Bringing its darkness closer, a never ending pitch black,
I ran as fast as i could but the darkness was persistent,
I could see it getting closer even from a distant,

I tried my best but eventually it caught up to me,
Bringing with it darkness as far as my mortal eyes can see,
It consumed me slowly with its single shade of black,
And now i am lost within the abyss with no way of going back.

Friday, March 10, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: darkness,depression,sadness,void
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jeremy Willson 10 March 2017

Yeah the abyss is pretty crummy man, I've definitely starred at it but it must not have liked the way I looked cause she's been futt bucking me for years. xD great poem 10/10 you might wanna check your lines capitalization but that's about it

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