The Actress Poem by Tamara Beryl Latham

The Actress

Rating: 5.0

Her form holds the scent of Jasmine,
Slight like Laura Wingfield and fragile
as pieces of a Crystal menagerie.

She moves,
as if balanced between dihedral angles of light
(like a star's dance of radiant energy)
with an alluring smile,
warmer than meadows of wildflowers
on an idle Day in Spring.

Wednesday, October 15, 2025
Topic(s) of this poem: dance,jasmine
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 08 July 2026

Such vivid and beautiful metaphors throughout your poem introduce the reader to an actress that sounds quite 'radiant'. In total agreement with Rob on this one!

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Richard, so nice of you to stop by. I appreciate your critique and appreciate the sentiment you expressed. : -)

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Tamara Beryl Latham 26 June 2026

Thank you for your input, Rob. : -)

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Rob Lamberton 17 June 2026

A captivating poem that stimulates the senses!

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Thank you, Rob. That is very generous. : -)

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Thanks Rob. I already commented, but for some reason my reply is not appearing.

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Thank you Rob. I appreciate your input. : -)

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Why have you used ' Day ' instead of day?

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PS In my reply, there is a spelling error. The line should read, 'I've woven her name throughout the poem.'

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Tamara Beryl Latham 20 January 2026

Day i the name of the actress. Crystal Jasine Day. I've oven her name throughout the poem. She starred locally in the play 'The Glass Menagerie, ' and did a fine acting job. Thanks for reading and replying. : -)

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