The Aesthetics Of Symmetry Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

The Aesthetics Of Symmetry

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The perfectly aligned palm-trees ornamented with rainbows
Refracted from the incandescent epicentre of sun in the glass,
The robust male-body on the beach in his minuscule red swimsuit;
The fluffy blonde hair on the shoulders of an emaciated boy;
The reflection of the sun in a perfectly globular baldhead;
The frail grace of an elderly lady with a hat in a wheelchair;
The rapidity of the sea-gull flying from one cliff to the other;
The footprints washed behind human vertical sticks and shadows;
The virginal physiognomy of petite old ladies white as milk;
The human heads floating like black balls on the water
Amongst deformed massive rocks as thrown by Hercules;
The art of a tattoo-all-covered body, metals, piercings;
The fallen rusty mulberry-leaves from tired autumn trees;
The bodies on the sun-beds symmetrically aligned on the beach
As therapeutic beds beneath the soothing doctor-sun's hands:
All in a spectacle of sunset, water splashing, and serenity.

Thursday, December 6, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,human being,nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 10 December 2018

Wow! Outstanding write, you construct a fascinating scene about people in all their different stages enjoying the sunshine and nature embracing them in such a joyous and memorable way!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 December 2018

Oh what a fantastic expression you have made! So touching and compelling. It is really a beautiful poem on Nature, beauty including human being. I love much the following lines.... The fallen rusty mulberry leaves from tired Autumn trees; The bodies on the sun-beds symmetrically aligned on the beach As therapeutic beds beneath the soothing doctor-sun's hands: All in a spectacle of sunset, water splashing, and serenity. Beautiful poem.10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 December 2018

A conglomeration of beauty from nature and human beings has been vividly depicted in this magnificent write. In a couple of seconds I was transported into a wonderful body of water where people and nature interact creating a beautiful scenery. The imagery is so compelling. Superbly penned.

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