Saturday, May 3, 2008

The Assault On The Innocents Comments

Rating: 4.1

The “She beast” lay silent
As the innocents drew near
Her talons were honed
Her heart knew no fear
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C R Clark
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Kesav Easwaran 05 December 2008

very good imagery you build, Richard...very good narration too...liked your presentation and style here...10

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Duncan Wyllie 26 July 2008

This sounds like a tale from long ago perhaps, , she being an eagle of somekind Not sure, eitherway, wonderful flow and very well presented Love duncan X

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Thad Wilk 03 May 2008

A nice poem and story Richard! Great rime and blending throughout! *10* A pleasure to read! ! Friend Thad

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