Tsira Gogeshvili

Rookie - 15 Points (29.07.1959. / Tbilisi)

The Autumn Melody ~ (Semodgomis Melodia) - Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

THE AUTUMN MELODY (Semodgomis melodia)


The cold autumn rain
Is drizzling
That sad melody
Down from the skies…

The wind steals
The dreamy flock
Of the clouds,
Carries away… and flies.

No smile at all,
No rebuking…
Just silence –
Acid and biting…

The moon rings
From the dome of the skies,
And throws the sparks
Into my eyes…

The cold autumn rain
I drizzling
That sad melody
Down from the skies…


Comments about The Autumn Melody ~ (Semodgomis Melodia) by Tsira Gogeshvili

  • (11/27/2011 9:26:00 AM)


    This one is going straight to the list of my favourite poems...such an excellent write Tsira..only in your page i can expect to find such gem. (Report) Reply

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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (9/19/2008 2:03:00 PM)


    I am delighted with the rhythm and metaphors of this poem.10 for it. (Report) Reply

  • (5/24/2008 10:19:00 AM)


    Lovely but sad, it must have been the end of a glorious summer. Its autumn where I live but we have short warm sunny days to remind us winters on its way. this is a good time to meditate and reflect. You write very well Bob (Report) Reply

  • Vidi Writes (4/19/2008 5:37:00 AM)


    May be i find the mood of the humans are
    Sad, gloomy, grieving, silent... on and on...
    The Monsoon and the Shower are same...

    Else

    The same Monsoon cannot be a Nectar to some
    And a pouring sadness to a few...

    This poem made me thinking.. about Rain, Clouds, Nectar and Human Sadness

    Nice read anyway...
    (Report) Reply

  • (4/8/2008 12:04:00 PM)


    That was really nice I am wraped in the feeling of Autumn thankyou Chris 10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 8, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 28, 2008


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