Monday, May 21, 2007

The Backrow Was The Best Comments

Rating: 5.0

Surfing on a wave of interest
Across a cable under floor
Messages and shopping mails
Cooking tips and friends not pals
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JoAnn McGrath 21 May 2007

I missed the kiss...but a broken hand was just missed...when attending a scar movie.he squeezed my fist.......but still love that backrow...know one to look over your shoulder you know: O)

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Archie Langford 21 May 2007

such a long time ago and yet, and yet I still remember that first the thumping of my heart like a magic drug. you rought it back in a wonderful way. thank you archie langford

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Marci Made 21 May 2007

Great poem David....those were the good 'ole days, 'eh? As for today, there's always books~~~~~~~ and movies, have to still stick with those, need to be a supportive Mum for my son which I know you'll agree. love, marci.xo

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Francesca Johnson 21 May 2007

Ahhh..those were the days! Young love, tender kisses, holding hands.... Thanks for bringing this all back to me, David.A nice poem. Love, Fran xxx

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Original Unknown Girl 21 May 2007

Love this David, you didn't need to write all the middle bits (but am glad you did!) , I loved the title and totally got those last lines! You're right, there's nothing better than snuggling up on the back row..... (think there's a great Drifter's song that could be the background music to this poem) . Most entertaining read - thank you. HG: -) xx

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