The Battle Within Poem by DM W

The Battle Within

Rating: 5.0


The constant battle
Within my soul between the
Forces of calmness
And chaos is often so
Draining. Indeed, it's
Hard, at times, to maintain a
Nice balance between
Light and dark; between pink and
Grey; between joy and
Despair. O it's so draining!

Friday, June 26, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: conflict
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dominic Windram 29 June 2020

Thanks for your comments guys...truly appreciated!

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Shaun Cronick 26 June 2020

Dominic this is sometimes reflected in writing and more so in the great scheme of life. A neat and compactly well written conflict ying and yang poem. A full score and added to my favs. Many thanks and take care.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 26 June 2020

Its all a part of life and moving on trying to be stoic can be the best solution. Thanks for sharing an introspective muse.10 points.

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