Wednesday, June 29, 2011

The Beautiful Land Comments

Rating: 5.0

I sit and I gaze, at the beautiful land,
With it's blue mountains far away.
As a white iguana races through the sand,
And the sun heralds the breaking day.
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 29 June 2011

Good poem. Vivid imagery and remarkable style. I loved the way you composed the poem. Voted 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and vote my poem 'A diabolic act, rape' on page 1. Regards Akmal

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