The Beauty Of Dreams Poem by Alexander Steen Stewart

The Beauty Of Dreams

Rating: 4.9


If ever I saw your face without fear,
It was always with eyes of sleep.
For in the world of dreams to you I'm dear,
With feeling oh so deep.

All other claims of beauty are but lies,
A blasphemy against my heart.
But can I for you my feelings disguise,
Impossible! One look and my senses depart.

Whenever our eyes did happen to meet,
Yours would show everything but affection.
But can I see now the embers of love's heat,
Upon more recent inspection?

Am I just seeing what I wish to see?
An illusion of love where none should be,
Mayhap one day you'll fall for me
But as of yet it's much too far to see.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 23 November 2008

Fine composition indeed! style of expression nice! 10+++

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Ency Bearis 23 November 2008

a nice narrative composition... Ency Bearis

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Marria Attar 23 November 2008

Very nice poem...so passionate..Great Job

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the poet 25 November 2008

A wonderful poem indeed. Keep it up.

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Chocolate Bunny 26 November 2008

I like this poem. very well done.

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Animeteen 4-ever 03 December 2008

that was deeep man soooo cool

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Venus McHeart 01 December 2008

i like your poem it remaind me...well i guess everyone will edentified with your poem....is really nice n yet kind of sad. Nice job writting feelings though... ;)

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Amanda Shelton 29 November 2008

Hi Alex its a good poem. Very interesting. Yours Turly: Amanda Shelton

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Anthony Edmond John 28 November 2008

Hi Alex I Cherish these lines of Urs though they need a little more distinct mature taste ok? Cheers. The Sage.. Anthony Edmond John +2348020984990

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Rich Hanson 27 November 2008

A nice effort. It's nice to see you working in a traditional sonnet form. You might change 'you' to 'your' in the first line though, and 'doth' comes across as too archaic, not in keeping with the contemporary language of the rest of the poem.

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Alexander Steen Stewart

Alexander Steen Stewart

Falkirk, Central Scotland
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